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My viewpoint on English

发布时间：2013-03-05 23:31:38 作者：彭丽  发布者：326071099@com 浏览次数：3599  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

     Up to now ,everyone of us has learned English for at least 7 years.That means  English has becomed a part of our learning.As far as I am concerned,with the wide spread of English ,having a good knowledge of it is necessary for us to meet the challenges of the future.Here comes the reasons:

          The most basic reason is Englishi four levels is a necessary condition for University graduates.If you haven't pass the exam ,it will be very bad .Your four years University maybe white read,because you cannot receive a graduation certificate.

          The second reason is we need it.As we all know,with the increasing competition,to find a good job more difficult.English ability will help to find jobs.Because chance favors only the prepared mind

          One reason for the next individual development needs.With the win support among the people of one world philosophy,having a good command of English will make your vision more open.Maybe you can also like a foreigner you familiar with Chinese.

          The last but not the least,many celebrities from childhood we are in contact with foreign.If we are able to know the knowledge of English culture,we can be more thorough understanding of celebtities.

          Thats all ,in a word ,I think English is very important

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  Up to now ,everyone of us has learned English for at least 7 years.That means  English has becomed a part of our learning.As far as I am concerned,with the wide spread of English ,having a good knowledge of it is necessary for us to meet the challenges of (in)the future.Here comes the reasons:

    The most basic reason is Englishi four levels (用CET4表示“大学英语四级”）is a necessary condition for University graduates.If you haven't （don't，条件状语从句“主将从现”）pass the exam ,it will be very bad .Your four years University maybe （may be）white read,（fail，“失败了”就是“白读了”）because you cannot receive a graduation certificate.

    The second reason is ^that we need it.As we all know,with the increasing competition,to find^ing a good job ^{will be} more difficult.English ability will help to find jobs.Because chance favors only the prepared mind

    One reason for (The third one is)the next (future)individual development needs ^{good English}.(need为及物动词，加宾语）With the win support among the people of one world philosophy,having a good command of English will make your vision more open.（wider，“更加宽广”）Maybe you can also like a foreigner you familiar with Chinese.

    The last but not the least,many celebrities from childhood we are in contact with foreign ^countries.If we are able to know the knowledge of English culture,we can be more thorough understanding of celebtities.

    Thats all ,in a word ,I think English is very important

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