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No lover, no love
发布时间:2020-02-22 10:14:11 作者:朱丹玲  发布者:ZhuDanling 浏览次数:110  类别:英文作文  
[初中一年级] 北京市 >> 丰台区 >> 丰台街道


No lover, no love

Zhu Danling, Fengtai No.8 Middle School, Beijing

 

I don't know when the new year's red envelope turned into a pack of masks. The fear of the virus keeps us at home.I think of the angel in white who doesn't ask for return and is not afraid of danger. I'm really worried for them.Many doctors have been infected, and there are still many doctors rushing to the front line of the epidemic.Grandpa Zhong Nanshan, in his 80s, led his team to study the virus day and night, hoping to develop a specific medicine as soon as possible.Although the venerable old man is an octogenarian, he still makes the greatest contribution to the control of the epidemic together with others.I admire their bravery and persistence.In this new year, they give us the courage and the method to face the epidemic correctly.It's the angels in white who give people hope to recover.From the end of the year to the new year, they have been unremitting, doing their best to fight against the virus.One white figure, one sweaty figure, one dutiful figure.Under the protective clothing of the doctors, how many heavy tasks are they shouldering, but they still face it with a smile. Thank you, angels in white for your efforts; thank you, medical researchers for their hard work. Thank you to people from all walks of life for fighting the epidemic.It is their efforts that have helped us build a safe protective wall. It is their hard work that has helped us usher in happiness and well-being. Although the virus is powerful and terrible, with their help, we will eventually overcome all difficulties.

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