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competition
发布时间:2020-04-17 19:09:20 作者:巩克银  发布者:1945578360 浏览次数:197  类别:英文作文  
[大学二年级] 山东省 >> 潍坊市 >> 青州市 >> 云门山街道


Nowadays, people say that today's society is a competitive society.Competition is everywhere and always .

I remember a sport game in the central school when I was in primary school.The teacher only took a few of us join.That was my first time to join sport game.

At that time, I chose the high jump. Although I have never participated in a sport game or high jump,but I have a height advantage. I still believe that I will not be the last one. Not surprisingly, I succeeded in the top three. Despite I was the top three, competition continues and even more intense than before.It gave me a sense of crisis.Unfortunately, I only got third score.

This made me realize that competition is endless, so we can't relax. Competition also is a way to help me grow up.

 

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