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发布时间：2013-04-20 19:24:04 作者：段荣坤  发布者：2413368936 浏览次数：2698  类别：中文作文  

               Myself

I'm Anna.I'm 12 years old.My favourite season is summer.Because I can swim in a lake and wear my favourite dress.My favourite fruit is grapes and mango.I'm helpful.I can sweep the floor and wash the dishes.I love myself.

段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/4/20 23:49:33
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                 My(Myself)

  I'm Anna.I'm 12 years old.I have two eyes,a nose,a big mouth.My favourite senson is summer.Because I can swim in a lake and wear my favourite drees.（dress)My favourite fruit is grapes and mango.I'm helpful.I can sweep the floor and do (wash)the dishes.I love my(myself).

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班

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                 Myself

  I'm Anna.I'm 12 years old.My favourite senson season is summer.Because I can swim in a lake and wear my favourite dress.My favourite fruit is grapes and mango.I'm helpful.I can sweep the floor and wash the dishes.I love myself.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班