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My day(第三次作文）

发布时间：2013-05-10 21:52:24 作者：刘晓慧  发布者：liuxiaohui 浏览次数：2668  类别：英文作文  

                                My day

   Hollo,I am Liu Xiao Hui.I get up at 6:30 every day in the morning ,but not on the weekend.I eat breakfast at 7:00.Usually I go to shool at 7:15.Sometimes I play sports at 8:20.I go home at 5:30p.m.I do homework at 6:00.I eat dinner at 7:00.I usually go to bed at 9:00.This is my day.What about yours?

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                                  My day

    Hollo(Hello),I am Liu Xiao Hui（Liu Xiaohui）.I get up at 6:30 every day in the morning ,but not on (at)the weekend.I eat(have，为什么不用eat呢？因为have着重于一般笼统的状态，而eat则指“吃”的具体动作。根据文章，应该指状态，所以用have） breakfast at 7:00.Usually I go to shool at 7:15.Sometimes I play (do)sports at 8:20.I go home at 5:30p.m.I do homework at 6:00.I eat (have)at 7:00.I usually go to bed at 9:00^p.m.This is my day.What about yours?