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我的周末计划

发布时间：2013-05-24 21:08:33 作者：孙承耀  发布者：sunchengyao 浏览次数：2661  类别：英文作文  

  on saturday morning,i read a books.in the afternoon,i played the piano.in the eveving i watched tv.on sunday morning,i went to a park.in the afternoon,i washed the clothes.in the enening,i watched tv.i was busy last weekend,but i was happy.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/25 13:41:22
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    on(On) saturday(Saturday) morning,i(I) ^{am going to} read a books.in (In)the afternoon,i(I) ^will played the piano.in(In) the eveving i (I) ^{am going to} watched tv(TV).on sunday(On Sunday) morning,i went (I will go) to a park.in(In) the afternoon,i washed(I will wash) the clothes.in(In) the enening,i(I am going to) watched tv.i (TV. I )was busy last weekend,but i(I) was happy.

  点评：1.一句话的首个单词的首字母大写，大写字母锁定键为CapsLk.

          2.表示“星期”的单词的首字母要大写，缩略词（例如“TV”是 “television”的缩写）每个字母都大写。

          3.文章的题目是“周末计划”，“计划”表示未发生的事，故文章的时态用将来时。