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This is my weekend(第三次作文）

发布时间：2013-05-25 19:40:53 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：2459  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

     Every weekend,I usually go shopping at 9:00 in the morning.Usually I visit my grandparents at 11:00a.m.I do homework at 1:00p.m.I often play sports at 4:00p.m.

    What about your weekend?Can you tell me please?

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       Every weekend,I usually go shopping at 9:00 in the morning.Usually I visit my grandparents at 11:00a.m.I do homework at 1:00p.m.I often play sports at 4:00p.m.

     What about your weekend?Can you tell me please?

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