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批改时间:2013/5/26 13:39:47
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The summer holiday is coming soon.
What will I do in my summer holiday?
I am going to go on a trip with my parents.
Im going to Dongguan Park in my summer holiday.
I will go with my parents.
We are going to eat good food and see the flowers in Dongguan Park.
We are going to climb mountains, too.
We can have a picnic there and we can read magazines there, too. O
f course, We will take many photos in the park.
I think I will have a happy holiday this summer. What about you?