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My Holiday Plan

发布时间：2013-05-26 13:28:56 作者：杜伟康  发布者：153444099 浏览次数：3602  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★★★★★★

The summer vacation is coming. We  will have a two-month holiday. I am going to relax myself. I will visit my granparents and spend two weeks with them. I am going to help my grandparents with the housework. Of course, I am going hiking with my grandparents. Perhaps, I am going to take a short trip. My parents and I decide to go to the beach because we like swimming in the sea. Besides, I am going to visit my old friends. I think we will have a happy time together. I will be a middle school student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. I am sure, I will have a busy holiday.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/26 13:42:31
  点评指数：★★
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  The summer vacation is coming. We  will have a two-month holiday. I am going to relax myself. I will visit my granparents and spend two weeks with them. I am going to help my grandparents with the housework. Of course, I am going(will go) hiking with my grandparents. Perhaps, I am going to take a short trip. My parents and I decide to go to the beach because we like swimming in the sea. Besides, I am going to visit my old friends. I think we will have a happy time together. I will be a middle school student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. I am sure, I will have a busy holiday.
  
  
• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/28 12:44:06
  点评指数：★★
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  The summer vacation is coming. We  will have a two-month holiday. I am going to relax myself. I will visit my granparents and spend two weeks with them. I am going to help my grandparents with do the housework. Of course, I am going to go hiking with my grandparents. Perhaps, I am going to take a short trip. My parents and I decide to go to the beach because we like swimming in the sea. Besides, I am going to visit my old friends. I think we will have a happy time together. I will be a middle school student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. I am sure I will have a busy holiday.
  
  
• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2013/5/28 22:24:10
  点评指数：★★
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  The summer vacation is coming. We  will have a two-month holiday. I am going to relax myself. I will visit my granparents and spend two weeks with them. I am going to help my grandparents with the housework. Of course, I am going(will go) hiking with my grandparents. Perhaps, I am going to take a short trip. My parents and I decide to go to the beach because we like swimming in the sea. Besides, I am going to visit my old friends. I think we will have a happy time together. I will be a middle school student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. I am sure, I will have a busy holiday.
  
    Tips : I think you'll have a lot of fun !