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My Children 's Day

发布时间：2014-01-07 14:32:35 作者：陈晓楠  发布者：chenxiaonan 浏览次数：5860  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

I am going to the zoo with my parents on Children^{,_{s Day.I am going there by bus.I am going to eat good food and see a lot of interesting animals. That will be fun!I will have a good time on Children's Day!！}}

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/28 22:08:52
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        I am going to ^{go to} the zoo with my parents on Children^{,_{s Day.I am going there by bus.I am going to eat good food and see a lot of interesting animals. That will be fun!I will have a good time on Children's Day!}}
• 批改教师：张燕华 ( 北京市 >> 首都师范大学 )
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        I am going to the zoo with my parents on Children^{,_{s Day.I am going there by bus.I am going to eat good food and see a lot of interesting animals. That will be fun!I will have a good time on Children's Day!}}

   

  _{^{to be going to 的句型用法正确，文章简单明了。希望你游完之后再写一篇，把动物如何有趣展现出来。}}

   

   

   

   

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
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        I am going to the zoo with my parents on Children^{,_{s Day.I am going there by bus.I am going to eat good food and see a lot of interesting animals. That will be fun!I will have a good time on Children's Day!}}

   

  _{^{点评：相信你的儿童节一定会过的很开心！记得回来跟大家分享游玩后的心情哦！}}