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My favourite sport

发布时间：2014-02-17 11:03:51 作者：白钰  发布者：bailongmei 浏览次数：2694  类别：中文作文  

我们的健康离不开运动。请你结合自己最喜欢的运动谈谈多锻炼对我们的益处。70词左右。

                     My favourite sport

     My favourite sport is swimming and  running.If you want to ask me why not like others sports. I want to tell you:because they are  not very easy.The swimming sports is very good, it's  better for our legs. The legs can became long .The running sports is good too,it's better for our legs too,but it is a little difficult than swimming ,You must do hard it .They are very healthy for our.

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  我们的健康离不开运动。请你结合自己最喜欢的运动谈谈多锻炼对我们的益处。70词左右。

  My favourite sport

  My favourite sport is swimming and  running.If you want to ask me why not like others sports. I want to tell you:because (that) they are  not very easy.The swimming sports is very good, it's  better (good) for our legs. The (Our) legs can became long .The running sports is good too,it's better (good) for our legs too,but it is a little difficult than swimming ,You must do hard ^on it .They are very healthy for our(us).

  英语中没有冒号、顿号、书名号；表示运动的名词后不加sports，前面零冠词；be good for对……有好处；介词后用宾格us