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发布时间:2014-02-17 16:27:54 作者:白钰  发布者:bailongmei 浏览次数:2761  类别:中文作文   优秀指数:★★
[初中二年级] 内蒙古自治区 >> 兴安盟 >> 乌兰浩特市 >> 第八中学


          请根据表格内容写一篇介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁的英语短文。70词左右 

               

Name:zhang Yining
Date of Birth:1982.10.5
Birthplace:Beijing
Height:1.68m

1986He:started to play table tennis

1991:joined the Beijing table tennis team

1993:joined the national table tennis team

1998: became a ping-pong champion

2004:won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens

2005:won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

                       Famous  ping-pong player

    In  china, we have a Famous ping-pong player -zhang yining.He was born in1982.10.5.He was born in Beijing.He is 1.68m tall.In1986 , He started to play table tennis .In 1991,Hejoined the Beijing table tennis team.In 1993,He

  joined the national table tennis team.In 1998,He became a ping-pong champion.In 2004,He won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens.In 2005.He won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship



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  • 批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
    批改时间:2014/2/18 10:15:44
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    请根据表格内容写一篇介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁的英语短文。70词左右

    Name:zhang Yining
    Date of Birth:1982.10.5
    Birthplace:Beijing
    Height:1.68m

    1986He:started to play table tennis

    1991:joined the Beijing table tennis team

    1993:joined the national table tennis team

    1998: became a ping-pong champion

    2004:won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens

    2005:won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

    Famous  ping-pong player

    In  china, we have a Famous ping-pong player -zhang yining(Zhang Yining). He (She) was born in1982.10.5.He (She) was born in Beijing.He (She) is 1.68m tall. In1986 , He (Shestarted to play table tennis .In 1991,He (Shejoined the Beijing table tennis team.In 1993,He (Shejoined the national table tennis team.In 1998,He (Shebecame a ping-pong champion.In 2004,He (Shewon two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens.In 2005.He (Shewon two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

    怡宁是国家女子乒乓球队的著名队员。


  • 批改教师:孟佳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 兰山区 >> 临沂中小学生综合实践基地 )
    批改时间:2014/3/18 20:29:49
    点评指数:★★
    点评内容:

    请根据表格内容写一篇介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁的英语短文。70词左右

    Name:zhang Yining
    Date of Birth:1982.10.5
    Birthplace:Beijing
    Height:1.68m

    1986He:started to play table tennis

    1991:joined the Beijing table tennis team

    1993:joined the national table tennis team

    1998: became a ping-pong champion

    2004:won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens

    2005:won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

    Famous  ping-pong player

    In  china, we have(There  is) a Famous ping-pong player -zhang yining.(Yi  ning).He was born in(on)1982.10.5.He was born in Beijing.He is 1.68m tall.In1986 , He started to play table tennis .In 1991,Hejoined the Beijing table tennis team.In 1993,He

    joined the national table tennis team.In 1998,He became a ping-pong champion.In 2004,He won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens.In 2005.He won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

     
     注意人称he和she 
     ,两字的人名拼写首字母都大写,三字的人名前两个首字母大写。


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