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Motherhood

发布时间：2014-03-15 22:17:59 作者：张译之  发布者：zhangyizhi 浏览次数：2803  类别：英文作文  

To my point of view,mother love is the greatest love in the world.
Two years ago,she became a single mother who has two little kids.She tried her best to hold them together and give them a sense of"family".She not only maintains their home but also teaches her little kids the ethics and values.Even though she is busy,she still squeezes out her little time to take them to church and reviews their homework with them.
What a selfless mother!She faces up to reality however difficult it may be.I am so moved that I burst into tears.
She reminds me of my friend Lily's mother who is a single mother as well.When Lily was a 4-year-old girl,lung cancer cut her dad off in his bloom.And when her father died,Lily and her mother were left destitute. The poor woman was forced to face up to the situation,but she never wanted to escape from the hard realistic.She used her thin body to support the family. Fortunately, they have a happy life now.
As the saying goes,motherhood is one of the hardest jobs in the world.They have to take care of us,move heaven to the earth to find anything we want.They are ones who support us in the dark.They do anything for us without any murmur.
As far as I am concerned, motherhood is the most purest and beautiful thing around the world.Time flies like an arrow.Our dear mothers is getting old,they get creases on their faces and their frame bowed.It is time to let us take care of them.

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