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The benefits of reading
发布时间:2014-05-20 21:12:09 作者:张池  发布者:huashuicici 浏览次数:5057  类别:英文作文  
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      Nowadays, more and more people dislike reading.  Moreover, if you ask someone wether he has read books or not , he will say that he has not studied and doesn't know a word. Also they will say that he has no time reading and is not interested in reading. Therefore, we can know that there are few people like to read in society and they don't pay  any attention to reading. So, we must change this bad phenomenon.

       In fact, reading can give us useful things. If you are careful you'll find it out, as the saying goes "Book are the ladder of human process". As we know that reading is the most important for us,and another saying is "Book is the spirital sustenance of mankind". Because this we should pay more attenntion to reading.

      Actually, reading has many benefits. When you feel boring, you can choose a book to read and find interest. Besides, reading does not only help you increase knowledge, but also  help you improve your taste, and it also makes you at ease.

     If someone reads more good books, he will gain more useful things and it affects his life. At last, reading benefits were so wonderful, we should bring up our reading habit.

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    Nowadays, more and more people dislike reading. Moreover, if you asked someone wether he has read books or not,  who would (he will) say that I (he) had (has) not been studied and didn't (doesn't) know a words. Also they would (will) say that I had (he has) no time reading and I had (is) not interested for (in) reading. Therefore,we can know that we have (there are) a few people like to reading on (in) society and they don't pay any attention to reading. So, we must change this bad phenomenon.

    In fact, reading can give us more useful things. If you are careful you'll find it out, as the saying goes "Reading is human beings' progress step".(Books are the ladder of human progress.) As for we know that reading is the most important for us and another saying is "Reading is human beings' spirit food". (Book is the spirital sustenance of mankind.) Because this (Therefore) we should pay more attenntion to reading.

    Actually, reading has many benefits. When you feel bored (boring) you can chose (choose) a book to read and find out inside interest. Besides, reading does not only can help you increase knowledge but also can help you improve your taste, and it also makes you at ease when you enjoy read interest.

    If someone reads more good books, who (he) will gain more useful things and it affects one's (his) life, it also the knowledge symbol. At last, we all know that reading benefits were so wonderful, we should bring up our reading habit, and we are often read, it is good to us.

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