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A Happy Trip

发布时间：2014-05-31 15:11:38 作者：俞湾  发布者：future 浏览次数：3522  类别：英文作文  

   On holidays , after I finished my homework, I went to the MountTaiwith my good friends. We took the bus to the mountain.. Then we began to climb up.

On the way to the top of the mountain, we talked with others and we felt so exciting. Also, we took quite a lot of photos because there were so beautiful. We saw so many tall trees and lovely flowers around. The weather there was great. The air was so clean and the sky was blue.

After two hours , we arrived at the top. From the top, we could see the whole city. It was really beautiful. We had a short rest on the top. And then, we went down the mountain.. Everyone felt so tired but also very happy.

How funny this trip! I think I will never forget this trip. I hope to get there again next year,

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