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发布时间:2012-09-21 15:17:09 作者:李听听  发布者:2012110115 浏览次数:3496  类别:中文作文  
[小学一年级] 山东省 >> 泰安市 >> 泰山区


  Anyang engineering college is located in the northern town of henan -Anyang.Anyang is a historical civilization city,and at the same time,Anyang is famous for the male, odd, risk taihang grand canyon natural landscape.

  Anyang engineering college is located in such a concurrently  cultural history landscape and the natural landscape city.As one of the henan provincial key universities, it   offer nearly more than twenty thousand various aspects talents  for the nation every year.Anyang engineering college regards "knowledge innovation," "as  the school motto.The students in the school not only attach importance to learning, and pay more attention to the practice of the moral perseverance.

   I thank Anyang engineering college to my four years of training.I'll remember you
forever.



教师点评:
  • 批改教师:王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
    批改时间:2012/9/22 20:48:00
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      Anyang engineering college Anyang Institute of Technology is located in the northern town of henan -Anyang Henan.Anyang is a historical civilization city,Anyang is a well-known state-listed historical cultural city, and at the same time,Anyang is famous for the male, odd, risk taihang grand canyon natural landscape.Taihang Grand Canyon which is grand,perilous and weird.

      Anang engineering college is located in such a concurrently  cultural history landscape and the natural landscape city.As one of the henan provincial key universities, As one of the main colleges of Henan, it   offers nearly more than twenty thousand various aspects talents  for the nation state every year.Anyang engineering college  Anyang Institute of Technology regards "knowledge innovation"as  the school motto.The students in the school not only attach importance to learning, and pay more attention to the practice of the moral perseverance. pay attention to the learning, but also the practice.

       I thank Anyang e ngineering college to my four years of training. Thank you,my college.I'll remember you
    forever. 



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