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on friendship

发布时间：2014-09-15 13:10:11 作者：李佩恒  发布者：356526 浏览次数：3097  类别：中文作文  

 friendship means happiness and it is very important. maybe some peple will ask me why friendship is immportant? i wii tell them friendship can not lack in your life. because friendship can bring you happinessand reduce your burden and sadness. if you have a friend, you can share your happiness with him. when you feel very sad and can not relax yourself ,you can tell him your feelings,he will help you reduce your burden. but how can we remain our friends? i think that friends should believe and understand each other .if you can do it, i believe you will have a good friendship.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2014/9/15 21:57:38
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   friendship means happiness and it is very important. maybe some peple will ask me why friendship is immportant? i wii (will) tell them friendship can not lack in your life. because friendship can bring you happiness and reduce (load) your burden and sadness. if you have a friend, you can share your happiness with him. when you feel very sad and can not relax yourself ,you can tell him your feelings,he will help you reduce (load) your burden. but how can we remain our friends? i think that friends should believe (trust) and understand ^with each other .if you can do it, i believe you will have a good friendship.

  英语句子开头首字母都要大写，但都没有，希望下次要端正学习态度。

• 批改教师：Jeenn Lee Hsieh ( 外国 >> 美国 )
  批改时间：2014/9/22 5:44:27
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   friendship means happiness and it is very important. maybe some peple will ask me why friendship is immportant? i wii tell them friendship can not lack in your life. because friendship can bring you happinessand reduce your burden and sadness. if you have a friend, you can share your happiness with him. when you feel very sad and can not relax yourself ,you can tell him your feelings,he will help you reduce your burden. but how can we remain our friends? i think that friends should believe and understand each other .if you can do it, i believe you will have a good friendship.

  
  

  Friendship matters because it brings happiness to people. Having good friends can reduce burden and sadness.

  
  

  It is important to keep friends who are intelligent, who are honest, and who have a sense of humor.  We feel lucky if we have good friends.