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What kind of girl I am?

发布时间：2015-05-14 22:48:57 作者：欧阳玉旋  发布者：hp193528 浏览次数：2922  类别：英文作文  

       Hello！everyone ,l want to start my introduction  by saying how grateful l am to all of you ,thank you everyone to give me the chance to stand here to introduce myself .My name is OuYangYuXuan ,you can call me Cordelia,I am a shy girl ,l am afraid of meeting strange people ,but I am easily to make friends with people ,So I am an easygoing girl ，I am a perfectionist ,I wish everything as I think ,but that is impossible ,so I am also sad and sort of blue ,Just like this .AS you can see .Just kidding…   And I am very patient to do one thing and can keep silent long time ,l like the sea , so I put the Cordelia as my English name ,It means the daughter of the sea  , Cordeilla was the youngest of the three daughters of King Lear and the only one to remain loyal to her father.,I am the girl like her , love my father very much !!

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