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发布时间：2016-03-26 12:29:33 作者：李双雨  发布者：1477966425 浏览次数：3140  类别：英文作文  

                                   An Unforgettable Experience With My Parents

1.   In my memories,this is my unforgettable experience.Last summer,my parents and I went to Beijing .We were in Beijing at 4 days. My parents and I at 3 days visited the summer palace, boating on the lake of kunming. Also, we went to the palace Museum,saw a lot of beautiful antiques .this makes ourselves feel the spectacular the Inperial palace stalwart.
2.   Last day,we went to the Beijing Great well. we get up at four in the morning, six o'clock started to climb. The steps of the Great Wall high is shaking,we must seize the entire railing, there are many steep slopes, it makes us afraid sometimes. we finally eached a difficult. Thought we were tired ,we were happy.we took a lot of photos.
3.   This experience let me and my parents are very memorable. 

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