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the advantage of internet

发布时间：2016-03-26 17:45:17 作者：赵男  发布者：18800426679zn 浏览次数：3453  类别：英文作文  

Currenly,we are living in a society overwhelmed by Internet.Thus,amount of people argue that it is a huge benefitfor our education and communication,while others hold that Internet as a higher risk in privacy and the addiction of teenagers.From my perspective,the arrival of the internet done good than harm.

 There is no doubt that online shopping has been playing an increasingly important role in our day. to day 

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  Currenly,we are living in a society overwhelmed by Internet.Thus,amount of people argue that it is a huge benefitfor our education and communication,while others hold that Internet as a higher risk in privacy and the addiction of teenagers.From my perspective,the arrival of the internet done good than harm.

  There is no doubt that online shopping has been playing an increasingly important role in our day. to 

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