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I want to run for the monitor

发布时间：2016-11-08 19:40:19 作者：李晓辉  发布者：15113127956 浏览次数：4122  类别：中文作文  

  Hello,everyone.My name is li xiao hui.My hobby is play sports Today,I amvery honoreed to stand on this platform to run for the monitor .I think I have the ability to serve as monitor .The follwing is my personal point of view .                        First of all,I served five years as a monitor in my high school and junior high school ,the teachers and classmates are very trust me .In the meantime, I would like to make friends in the University to improve my interpersonal skills and pave the way for future employment.

      If I were the monitor ,I would serve the students ,create a harmonious atmosphere .If there is a Mao Dun ,I will try my best to make a settlement .Last but not least ,I wish everyone have a happy life in the University.

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  Hello,everyone.My name is li xiao hui.My hobby is play sports Today,I am very honoreed to stand on this platform to run for the monitor .I think I have the ability to serve as monitor .The follwing is my personal point of view .                        First of all,I ^will served five years as a monitor in my high school and junior high (middle) school ,the teachers and classmates are very trust me .In the meantime,(Meanwhile) I would like to make friends in the University to improve my interpersonal skills and pave the way for future employment.

  If I were the monitor ,I would serve the students ,create a harmonious atmosphere .If there is a Mao Dun (are contradictions in the process),I will try my best to make a settlement (modulate).Last but not least ,I wish everyone have a happy life in the University.