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Life would be difficult without internet

发布时间：2012-11-20 13:13:41 作者：李国琪  发布者：liguoqi 浏览次数：17066  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★

With the development of the society, internet  is  more  and more imporment to us.

In our life, we need a lot of daily things. At the moment,it  is convenient for us to buy some daily things on internet. the goods of the internet are virous,we can buy what we want . Bisides,we can also learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves and so on. But as we all know,everything has two sides.we should make the full use of the intenet ,Don’t be addicted to it.

    In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful. it plays an important role in our life. Do you think so?

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/11/25 15:33:44
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  With the development of the society, internet  is  more  and more imporment to us.

  In our life, we need a lot of daily things. At the moment,it  is convenient for us to buy some daily things on internet. the(The) goods of the internet are virous,we can buy what we want . Bisides,we can also learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves and so on. But as we all know,everything has two sides.we should make the full use of the intenet ,Don’t be addicted to it.

      In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful. it plays an important role in our life. Do you think so?
  
  
• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2012/12/4 20:44:10
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  With the development of the society, internet  is  more  and more imporment to us.

  In our life, we need a lot of daily things. At the moment,it  is convenient for us to buy some daily things on internet. the goods of the internet are virous,we can buy what we want . Bisides,we can also learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves and so on. But as we all know,everything has two sides.we should make the full use of the intenet ,Don’t be addicted to it.

      In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful. it plays an important role in our life. Do you think so?