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On the importance of a name

发布时间：2012-12-11 20:09:56 作者：欧永慧  发布者：382646815 浏览次数：3550  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

 There is no denying the that it is controversial topic whether names are important or not. Some hold the positive view.They claim that a good name can be remembered easily.Also a good name can brng a lot more opportunity than others.They also think that it contributes a lot to children's growing up.

  However,there are also some other people hold the opposite view.They argue that a name is nothing but a code to distinguish one from another.A people with good name seems may not so successful than those without good name.What's more ,those people who with usual name are more likely to be success.

  As far as i am concered,there is no obvious impaction on whether having a good name .But i have to admit that a well designed name can help a person on some extent.   

 

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   There is no denying the that it is ^a controversial topic whether names are important or not. Some hold the positive view.They claim that a good name can be remembered easily.Also a good name can brng (bring)a lot more opportunity (opportunities) than others.They also think that it contributes a lot to children's growing up.

    However,there are also some other people hold the opposite view.They argue that a name is nothing but a code to distinguish one from another.A people with good name (People with good names)seems may not so successful than those without good names.What's more ,those people who with usual name are more likely to be successfull.

    As far as i(I) am concered,there is no obvious impaction on whether having a good name .But I have to admit that a well designed name can help a person on some extents.   

   

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   There is no denying the that it is controversial topic whether names are important or not. Some hold the positive view.They claim that a good name can be remembered easily.Also a good name can brng（bing） a lot more opportunity than others.They also think that it contributes a lot to children's growing up.

    However,there are also some other people hold the opposite view.They argue that a name is nothing but a code to distinguish one from another.A people with good name seems may not so successful than those without good name.What's more ,those people who with usual name are more likely to be success.

    As far as i am concered,there is no obvious impaction on whether having a good name (names).But i have to admit that a well designed name can help a person on some extent.